Fantastic Writing!

Room 3 have been learning how to use similes in their stories to make them more interesting for other people to read. These are the stories they wrote about their mum or dad. We hope you enjoy reading them.

My Mum is like a restaurant cook and she smells like a rose. She bakes cupcakes. She is as beautiful as a thousand flowers and I love her. by Sabine

My dad is really fast. He is as fast as a dog called Bolt and he is really nice. By Oscar

My mum is an angel. She is like a soft feather. She is so, so nice. She really likes me. By Amy

My dad is like a great wrestler. My dad is the best in the world. My dad is like a star. By Luca

My mum is good at tennis. She looks like a rainbow and a rainbow rose. She is beautiful. She is as yellow as the sun. By Yasmin

My mum is as cool as Starwars. My mum likes Starwars. My mum took me to Paraparaumu. My mum let me sit next to her. My mum cooks nice stuff for me. My mum gave me two ten cents because my mum is nice. by Daniel

My dad is like a handsome dad. My dad is as strong as a gorilla. I love my dad. by Holly

My mum is cool. She smells like a rose. by Rufus

My mum is like a beautiful cake. My mum is as beautiful as a fairy rose. My mum smells like sweet candy floss. My mum talks loud but not too loud. She is as soft as a pillow. She is as kind as a fairy. She is just so beautiful and kind. by Abigail

My mum is really good at tennis. She is as good as a teacher. by Cameron

My mum is like a rose. My mum is as beautiful as a golden boat. by Shannyn

My dad is like a rockstar and he smells like fire and he is very very cool. by Chevron

My mum is like a glittering star in the sky. My mum is as beautiful as a rose. by Sophia

My dad is like a cuddle monster. My dad is as surprising as a clown and I love him very, very much. by Hugo

My mum is beautiful. She can bounce the tennis ball with her racquet. by Theo

My mum is like a famous cook. She smells like a rose. She looks like a rose. by Georgina

I like my mum. She likes playing tennis. She is gorgeous. by Sam

My mum is a great cook. She smells like flowers. by Ethan